Wednesday, April 28, 2010

hanging around

harmless hook
hanging on the door
holding a yellow bathrobe

who knew
how many secrets you
have

How do you feel
holding me powerless
helpless

heartless

hook
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2 comments:

  1. perfect71psApril 30, 2010 at 3:30 AM

    v. good. &tick;

    The 'h' alliteration sounds like someone a little breathless and uncomfortable.

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  2. strivingforpeaceApril 30, 2010 at 11:46 AM

    Thank you PL -- I adore alliteration

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