Monday, September 20, 2010

The Path

I carve

my journey

through fields of flowers

through cold deserted desert nights

through cool running waters I step lightly

through forests that close overhead

my feet hug the ground

of life's uncertain

path





certain only

that it would lead me to you






if but for a moment

3 comments:

  1. Very much like too... but from my own painful experiences, (I actually published a book with this particular error, missed by me, my editor and my publisher)... a dessert is yummy, sweet and preferably chocolate... a desert is a dry and sandy place, hot in the day and cold at night. (Or is it the other way around?)

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  2. Thanks Xantu (what does your name mean btw?)

    Am too much in my head to be editing and I have found I can't script anything but strange rambling verse (hopefully distinct from the strange rambling short-bloggy-essays I usually turn out)

    I kinda like this one too - actually SFP I was thinking of you when I wrote it!

    xx JaT

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